诗歌 | 《这样真好（外二首）》
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136);">安娟英（江苏）</span></p></section><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">朦朦胧胧认识</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">在碧波烟雨里</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">读你远去的背影</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">从此我与孤独同行</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">慰之念之</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">尽凭歌声寄意</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">今生有缘无法忘记</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">你擦肩而去留下我</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">无法回归</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">神秘美好的遐想</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">经历的点点滴滴</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">明明不是深爱</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">却总有刻骨之念</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">再也找不回呵</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">我原来的自己</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">来去匆匆一瞬间</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">明明没有相聚</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">却总无法忘记你</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">就这样无论</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">在我心里、在我梦里</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">在我脑海里</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">朝思暮想愁肠百转</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">唯独不要</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">你走进我蒙太奇式</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">空中花园的红房子</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">我只要自己</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">独自珍藏这份</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">飘渺真爱的回忆</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">真的这样最好</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">我还是不要再见你</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">为了能天长地久地</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">保持好你朦胧中的温和潇洒</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">为了能天长地久地</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">保持好我朦胧中的婉约娇美……</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;"><br/></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px;">2024.2.16日</span></p><p><span style="color: rgb(255, 169, 0);"><strong><span style="color: rgb(255, 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style="font-size: 15px;">直接惊醒施墩遗址的旧梦</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">输入新奇的意境和灵感</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18px;"><strong><span style="color: rgb(255, 169, 0);">落红成歌</span></strong></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">前世今生只为等待 </span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">有一天与你擦肩而过</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">在云雾缭绕的桃花源</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">如果可将我的模样</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">定格到你的灵魂深处</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">我将放下所有的矜持</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">学会骄情浪漫</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">未了的芳魂只为</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">渐远而去的背影</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">创意爱的传奇</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 15px;">直到天长地久…….</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 17px;"><strong style="color: rgb(62, 62, 62);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;letter-spacing: 0.544px;text-wrap: wrap;background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="color: rgb(255, 169, 0);">【简评】</span></strong></span></p><section style="text-indent: 2em;"><span style="font-size: 14px;">安娟英的第一首诗《这样真好》有如下特点：</span></section><section style="text-indent: 2em;"><span style="font-size: 14px;">首先，在情感表达方面。</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">诗人的情感真挚且细腻，整首诗围绕着一段未曾圆满的缘分和思念展开，深刻地传达了对某人的难以忘怀和内心的纠结。</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">那种“明明不是深爱，却总有刻骨之念”的复杂情感被描绘得很生动，让读者能感受到主人公内心的矛盾和挣扎。</span></section><section style="text-indent: 2em;"><span style="font-size: 14px;">其次，在意象与氛围方面。</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">以“碧波烟雨”营造出一种迷离、朦胧的氛围，为这段若即若离的情感奠定了基调。</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">“蒙太奇式空中花园的红房子”等意象富有想象力和神秘感，增添了诗歌的艺术魅力。</span></section><section style="text-indent: 2em;"><span style="font-size: 14px;">再次，在结构与韵律方面：</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">诗歌结构较为松散，行文流畅自然，没有严格的格律限制，更注重情感的自然抒发。</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">语言上，有一定的节奏感，但不是特别强烈，通过重复和排比的手法，如“在我心里、在我梦里、在我脑海里”增强了情感的渲染力。</span></section><section style="text-indent: 2em;"><span style="font-size: 14px;">最后，在主题与深度方面：该诗</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">探讨了爱情中的遗憾、思念以及对美好回忆的珍藏，表达了对保持美好印象、不愿破坏心中想象的坚持。</span><span style="font-size: 14px;text-indent: 2em;letter-spacing: 0.544px;">在深度上，不是仅停留在情感的表面上，还深入挖掘了人们在面对不完美爱情时的内心抉择和自我保护。</span></section><section style="text-indent: 2em;"><span style="font-size: 14px;">总体而言，这首诗情感真挚，能巧妙<span style="color: rgb(62, 62, 62);font-family: Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif;font-size: 14px;letter-spacing: 0.544px;text-indent: 34px;text-wrap: wrap;background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">运用<span style="color: rgb(62, 62, 62);font-family: Helvetica Neue, 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